Linking with the Sunday Muse for Muse #170
Hosted this week by the amazing poet Shay!
Come join us!
An old woman looks in a mirror, recalls a little girl with a
rag doll, and wonders what became of the little girl. ~Robert Brault
I used to have perfect vision
Could see straight like the barrel of a new gun
But things get lost in the passage
Heirlooms we once held tightly
Become too heavy and slip out of our hands
China gets broken
And so do knees and hearts
The view ahead becomes too close
And the rear view is like a trip to China away
The strange thing is
It all happens slow and yet so fast
You don’t remember the day it happens
But you look in the mirror one morning and think
What is that?!
For it is an eternity and a moment’s blur of things all at
once
A million grimaces and smiles of hello and goodbye
wrapped around a
lifetime of being in the thick of it
From torn ligaments into divorce and on to cataracts
It all sounds sad and full of pain
But frankly if you have been living life fully
Then it is part of the package
You can see it as a blessing or a curse
Just don’t use a magnifying mirror!
This is exquisite, Carrie, and such a true account of the passage of time.
ReplyDeleteThank you Bev!
DeleteWhat is that indeed! Leonard Cohen song goes "I said this can't be me, must be my double." I know the feeling! When did THIS happen!?
ReplyDeleteYes,for me it happened too soon. LOL
DeleteOne joy is when they ask you how old you are. That was unacceptable earlier but now hem and haw but give in. Then appreciate their retort, invarably it will be "Well, you don't look that old."
ReplyDeleteYou are too kind Jim. I am not really that old, but look it, and feel it many a time. I got the all grey head to prove it. LOL
DeleteI like the acceptance in this, and the wry humor, especially at the end. Some great lines, too--"China gets broken.." and "...so fast/You don’t remember the day it happens..." Really a wise poem, neither under- nor over-written. Simple things are best at our age, in life and in poetry too, perhaps. Maybe that's the secret of dealing with the shitstorm of everything else.
ReplyDeleteThank you so much Joy! I think you are so right about simplicity. You know the old saying...."growing old is not for sissies" That line is one we come to know more clearly when the time arises. :-)
DeleteYou describe the process and the passage of time well.
ReplyDeleteThank you so much Lisa.
DeleteOooh! Oooh! "Could see straight like the barrel of a new gun" - that is terrific!
ReplyDeleteThank you so much Qbit!
DeleteI love this. One day, in my 50's, i lòoked in the mirror and my grandma's face Was looking back at me. Now it is Methusela, lol. Life is rich. I cant get over how rich the journey has been. Love this poem, Carrie.
ReplyDeleteThank you so much Sherry and I can relate, but you have a beautiful smile, and you are NO Methusela!!
Delete"A million grimaces and smiles of hello and goodbye
ReplyDeletewrapped around a lifetime of being in the thick of it"
Yes indeed, being in the thick of things does have its price of adventure to pay.
Happy Sunday
Much❤love
The way you flowed through the different stages is just amazing. Loved this poem immensely, Carrie :)
ReplyDeleteAwww many thanks to you my friend Sunita!!
Deleteso thought provoking Carrie
ReplyDelete"But you look in the mirror one morning and think
What is that?!
For it is an eternity and a moment’s blur of things all at once"
Thank you so much Laura!
Delete"For it is an eternity and a moment’s blur of things all at once "" This line held the kernel of the tasty nut's delight, tempting your readers to eat your words like a glutton. What a satisfying meal!
ReplyDeleteI am delighted you enjoyed it Jinksy!!
DeleteAn eternity / a moment. I'm at a loss for words, this poem is you / me / every person.
ReplyDeleteYou are right my friend. Life's journey is a we not an I.
DeleteIt's amazing how in our minds, we are still young. The wrinkled reality in the mirror cannot be denied though. This is so perfect Carrie!
ReplyDeleteYes, you are so right Linda. Lately my wrinkles are being loud and annoying. LOL Thank you so much for joining us at the Muse this week!
DeleteMemories form each moment we breathe. We end up years away from them and wonder how time grew such swift wings. Your poem is powerful, beautiful, and filled with so many lines we all feel at some moment in time.
ReplyDeleteYour comment is poetic my friend. Thank you so much!
DeleteWow, this is full of cold-water-smack-in-the-face truth! Isn’t it amazing Carrie, how life in the rear view mirror seems to shrink to a blink — but the getting to this point seemed such a journey as it was unfolding… and where the hell did these wrinkles come from!? 🤔😉✌🏼
ReplyDeleteLove this! A little bit of lament cast into celebration!
ReplyDeleteI am delighted you love it my friend!
Delete"But you look in the mirror one morning and think
ReplyDeleteWhat is that?!
For it is an eternity and a moment’s blur of things all at once"
Truth in these words, Carrie. So well done with a killer ending!
Thank you so much Sara! :-)
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