Saturday, July 24, 2021

Cracks in the China

 


Linking with the Sunday Muse for Muse #170 

Hosted this week by the amazing poet Shay!

Come join us!


An old woman looks in a mirror, recalls a little girl with a rag doll, and wonders what became of the little girl. ~Robert Brault

 

I used to have perfect vision

Could see straight like the barrel of a new gun

But things get lost in the passage

Heirlooms we once held tightly

Become too heavy and slip out of our hands

China gets broken

And so do knees and hearts

The view ahead becomes too close

And the rear view is like a trip to China away

The strange thing is

It all happens slow and yet so fast

You don’t remember the day it happens

But you look in the mirror one morning and think

What is that?!

For it is an eternity and a moment’s blur of things all at once

A million grimaces and smiles of hello and goodbye

 wrapped around a lifetime of being in the thick of it

From torn ligaments into divorce and on to cataracts

It all sounds sad and full of pain

But frankly if you have been living life fully

Then it is part of the package

You can see it as a blessing or a curse

Just don’t use a magnifying mirror!

 

 

 


38 comments:

  1. This is exquisite, Carrie, and such a true account of the passage of time.

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  2. What is that indeed! Leonard Cohen song goes "I said this can't be me, must be my double." I know the feeling! When did THIS happen!?

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  3. One joy is when they ask you how old you are. That was unacceptable earlier but now hem and haw but give in. Then appreciate their retort, invarably it will be "Well, you don't look that old."

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    1. You are too kind Jim. I am not really that old, but look it, and feel it many a time. I got the all grey head to prove it. LOL

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  4. I like the acceptance in this, and the wry humor, especially at the end. Some great lines, too--"China gets broken.." and "...so fast/You don’t remember the day it happens..." Really a wise poem, neither under- nor over-written. Simple things are best at our age, in life and in poetry too, perhaps. Maybe that's the secret of dealing with the shitstorm of everything else.

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    1. Thank you so much Joy! I think you are so right about simplicity. You know the old saying...."growing old is not for sissies" That line is one we come to know more clearly when the time arises. :-)

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  5. You describe the process and the passage of time well.

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  6. Oooh! Oooh! "Could see straight like the barrel of a new gun" - that is terrific!

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  7. I love this. One day, in my 50's, i lòoked in the mirror and my grandma's face Was looking back at me. Now it is Methusela, lol. Life is rich. I cant get over how rich the journey has been. Love this poem, Carrie.

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    1. Thank you so much Sherry and I can relate, but you have a beautiful smile, and you are NO Methusela!!

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  8. "A million grimaces and smiles of hello and goodbye

    wrapped around a lifetime of being in the thick of it"

    Yes indeed, being in the thick of things does have its price of adventure to pay.

    Happy Sunday

    Much❤love

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  9. The way you flowed through the different stages is just amazing. Loved this poem immensely, Carrie :)

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  10. so thought provoking Carrie
    "But you look in the mirror one morning and think

    What is that?!

    For it is an eternity and a moment’s blur of things all at once"

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  11. "For it is an eternity and a moment’s blur of things all at once "" This line held the kernel of the tasty nut's delight, tempting your readers to eat your words like a glutton. What a satisfying meal!

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  12. An eternity / a moment. I'm at a loss for words, this poem is you / me / every person.

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    1. You are right my friend. Life's journey is a we not an I.

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  13. It's amazing how in our minds, we are still young. The wrinkled reality in the mirror cannot be denied though. This is so perfect Carrie!

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    1. Yes, you are so right Linda. Lately my wrinkles are being loud and annoying. LOL Thank you so much for joining us at the Muse this week!

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  14. Memories form each moment we breathe. We end up years away from them and wonder how time grew such swift wings. Your poem is powerful, beautiful, and filled with so many lines we all feel at some moment in time.

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    1. Your comment is poetic my friend. Thank you so much!

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  15. Wow, this is full of cold-water-smack-in-the-face truth! Isn’t it amazing Carrie, how life in the rear view mirror seems to shrink to a blink — but the getting to this point seemed such a journey as it was unfolding… and where the hell did these wrinkles come from!? 🤔😉✌🏼

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  16. Love this! A little bit of lament cast into celebration!

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  17. "But you look in the mirror one morning and think

    What is that?!

    For it is an eternity and a moment’s blur of things all at once"

    Truth in these words, Carrie. So well done with a killer ending!

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